Tuesday, 21 May 2019

Chinese in New Zealand-1880s


Last week i did a small poem on Chinese in New zealand around the 1800s.we learned a bit about them then everyone had to do a small poem about us being in the Maori eyes/perspective and the Chinese eyes/perspective.it sounds a little off because of some words but i might as well say whats in my mind and all i can think of.but please don't give me hate if i offended you but enjoy.
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2 comments:

  1. Haki14 June 2019 at 10:12

    Kia Ora, Malcolm this is Haki here. I'm year 7 too and new to an intermediate.
    I thought that your poem was very interesting that your talking about your whenua, people have stolen from our family whenua and this poem basically sums that 👌

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  2. Anonymous18 June 2019 at 12:29

    thank you for the feedback Haki i appreciate it

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